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[词作] 木兰花慢 咏荷 |
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发表于 2020-6-16 12:31
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多谢思明兄,翠盖指的荷叶,这里用嫣然,晕红,翠盖,并列三个词,嫣然指的花的形态,晕红指的颜色,及态度,翠盖指叶子,,不妥之处兄明说,改正即是,感谢兄的直言!
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