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[词曲] 夏词【乌夜啼】 |
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夏云之变幻无常,扣题紧密,描摹生动细腻,结句语意双关,耐品味!
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因为有底气,可以柳下乘凉,闲观风云变幻
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何须觅桃园,仙境在身边
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好词!灵动唯美,通过,蜻蜓,村姑的参与,让静态的荷生出动态的美。悄地有人来,与下片无缝衔接,结句出彩,村姑为了掐荷叶,不小心弄湿了双脚,让人仿佛看到了那份娇嗔。有味!劲赏!
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